Dungeon Magazine #29


I drink heavily in order to forget previous issues of Dungeon Magazine. This makes me prone to saying things like “This is the BEST ADVENTURE EVER in Dungeon Magazine!” My humbleness is matched only by my propensity for hyperbole. The last adventure in this, from Willie Walsh, is VERY good. I’m as surprised in saying that as you are in reading it, if you’ve been following along.

Nymph’s Reward
Jeff Fairbourn
Levels 4-5

This is a wilderness/cave exploration mission to find a potion for a nymph. She wants you to go to this cave full of orcs/ogres and get this potion to save her nymph sister, who has been cursed. The wilderness has three of four adventures and the cave has another twenty or so encounters. When the party comes back they find out (probably) that the nymph is actually a hag and the potion lets her regain her true form. There’s soooo much going on in this adventure, from a design standpoint, that I don’t really understand. You meet some Harpers in the woods. They are powerful and if you mess with them then you get your ass kicked after the adventure by a different group of Harpers. Why? Why not make them weak and give them some great treasure to loot? Put the big red shiny button in front of the players. The potion turns out to be a potion of magic resistance … but it only works on the hag. Why? Why not let the players use it if they want to? It’s not going to unbalance things. After the party gets the potion for the hag she attacks them. Why? They did a great job for her! WOuldn’t the game be much more fun if the party had this kind of amoral/evil associate they could go visit from time to time? Just like with theHarpers … why not give the players a choice and tempt them instead of deciding why they HSOULD do and enforcing it through the rules of the adventure? Everything in this adventure sucks. Monsters attack out of spite, even though they should have other motivations. The treasure is all book item items, and boring old +1 swords and shields at that. This should be a great little place of ruff & ready dudes, a bro-house now that the master is away. Wrestle some orcs and kick back, maybe! The adventure is SOOOO much more limiting the way it is written.

Ex Libris
Randy Maxwell
Levels 5-8

This is an exploration of an old library to recover books. It has a gimmick; the library is made up of rooms that slide around like one of those sliding tiles puzzles, you know, the ones with the empty tile spot that you slide the other tiles around? Same thing, but the rooms of the library slide around without the control of the party and they are trapped until they find out how to control it. The tiles were included as a supplement to the magazine. (Mine were partially cut out and missing two.) This has two sections: one in the buildings outside the library and one in the sliding library section. The mundane section is boring and has some hevuvas running around doing “evil things” such as “praying in a mocking way” and the like. Uh … show, don’t tell. Maybe it’s a problem with the Standards people, but I hate being told something is evil. Show me. Put some heads on stakes. Flay someone, still alive. The reaction of the PLAYERS will be better. Then again, we’re in the 2E demon-but-not-really-called-that era, so this may be a Standards thing. Idk, all I know is it sucks. Lots of long descriptions of mundane rooms with nothing interesting going on. There ARE some special mechanics listed, such as “scrambling out of a pool of water when being attacked by dismembered hands” and other sorts of things. I like these sorts of things, as long as they don’t take up too much space. They get a little long in this adventure, but I appreciate the idea. The moving rooms section is LAME. You have this very cool mechanic but it’s not taken advantage of. Instead you get a bunch of books, most of which are cursed in some way to summon monsters or kill you. And yet you need to open the books to find the puzzle solution to get out of the library. Maybe I’m being too harsh. It just seems VERY repetitive. Find book, open book, kill summoned creature. Move on. Certainly there is some room there to come up with some interesting tactics to minimize things, but 15 rooms full of this overstays its welcome. It needs other hooks. It doesn’t have them.

Through the Night
Leonard Wilson
Levels 1-2

A twofer sidetrack about an abandoned inn an an invisible stalker roaming around it. It’s not really anything at all. Just one boring & mundane room description after another with no interesting going on, and then an invisible stalker.

’Til Death Do Us Part
J. Mark Bicking
Levels 8-10

FUCK! After reviewing that Willie Walsh adventure I have no patience for this or Ex Libris. A ghost and a Groaning Spirit live in an abbey, according to the WAYYYYYYY too long backstory that attempts to justify every detail of everything. They ambush travelers and have a trap set up so that a mezzoloth is let out of an Iron Flask when a door is opened. This is just one of the numerous death trap adventures where everything is set up and the dice loaded against the party. “They anticipated …” this and “they have prepared …” that. It’s nothing more than an 11-room eight page 4e encounter. There’s a metric shit ton of justifications for what is going on: the pits were dug by Justin when he was soul jarred” or “the magic webs are another one of Justins creations before he was killed” and so on. Just let magic be magic. You don’t need to explain magic, Mr. Technocracy. I DESPISE these sort of set-up adventures. There are a couple of interesting treasures. A cursed scroll that causes you to grow an extra head that babbles gibberish all the time, and a music box that, when played, causes all to hear it to covet it. Also, a human skull hanging from a thick iron chain, a Greenstone amulet. These are all great. If the adventure, encounters, and rooms had detail like this then I would be lauding the adventure instead of damning it. The ghost used a wish spell to attach the Iron Flash to the back of a door. Seriously? You think that’s fun and/or interesting? That’s lazy.

Mightier than the Sword
Willie Walsh
Levels 1-4

This adventure is absurd, in every wonderful sense of that word. It may be the best adventure Dungeon has published up to this point. You know how good it is? I LOVED THE BACKSTORY! I HATE long backstories, but I LOVED this one. One of the things I like about D&D adventures is when the players come up with crazy ideas on how to do something and we get to watch the comedy/tragedy that unfolds as they implement their zany plan. In the same genre is the adventure where the characters are the straight men. There’s some kind of zaniness going on around the characters and the players are trying to wade through it all. This is, probably, one of the few ways to do humor in D&D, and I LOVE IT. Everything in this adventure is completely plausible and makes sense. And when you take it as a whole, as an outsider, you’ll be left saying: What the FUCK is going on here? Are you people INSANE?! This is a faction adventure. And therefore an adventure with NPC’s . These are very good things to have in an adventure. The players and their characters will always interact with the world around them, especially in a village adventure like this, and having strongly imagined NPC’s goes a VERY long way to brining an adventure to life.
[Pontification OFF]
In a small town one of the scribes has invented … a metal nib for the end of a quill. The guild of scribes now hates him. The ink makers love him. The Goose Breeders Association hates him. The paper manufacturers are in both camps. The druids hate him. Essentially, everyone in this small town has an opinion, entirely plausible. And then the scribe turns up dead. The council, divided in to the two camps, seeks an independent prosecutor to investigate. Oh, and there’s a Committee on Public Recriminations running around also. And in to this quite plausible and quite absurd set up the party is tossed. And it’s wonderful. There are mobs laying wreaths and jumping to conclusions, the competent, the incompetent, random wanderers … in fact, lets talk about the wanderers. There’s a small overland adventure to get to the village. The party is accompanied by the messenger who delivered to them the offer. Except there are two, one from each faction, and they hate each other and compete to see who’s better and yet won’t go so far as to kill each other. It’s brilliant! And then the wanderers come in to play. There are 8 or so of these and each has a little set up to riff off of. One is with a normal hedgehod. If asked, via a Speak spell, he comes down completely neutral on the issue of the quill nibs, as long as hedgehog quills are not in consideration. THIS IS BRILLIANT. EVERYONE should have an opinion! (Not all do, but as the DM I’ll sure as fuck riff on that one things and turn EVERYONE in to having an opinion!!!) This thing suffers a bit from ’the style at the time’ issues. A summary of NPC’s would have been useful and some of the text gets a bit long. But, the adventure is GOLD! If you need to suffer through one old adventure with too much text this year then THIS is the one.

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6 Responses to Dungeon Magazine #29

  1. Badmike says:

    Totally off the wall here, but J. Mark Bicking was one of the first dudes I ever met when I first got online back in ’92 or so. We kept in touch for many years but I haven’t had contact with him in over a decade. Very cool guy, even if he was a Philadelphia Eagles fan.

    Nymph’s Reward is a great idea in search of some kind of execution. I ran this many moons ago and as suggested, made the “Nymph/Hag” an occasional ally…don’t recall if the party ever did find out she was really a Hag in disguise. However as presented it points out a lot of problems in various Dungeon mag adventures that I believe were caused by the Dungeon Editorial Staff.

    Reason Being: Through knowing guys like Mark bitd I got to read the “rules for submission” or whatever Dungeon handed out at the time with the official guidelines for writing adventures. One of the stipulations was sort of like the old comics code where “Evil had to be unnattractive or flawed” type of thing inany submitted adventures, which probably led to the stupidity in the Nymph’s Reward (and many other Dungeon adventures at the time). So maybe the author wrote a kick-ass adventure where the characters had to bang the Nymph or something and then she turned into a Hag mid-bang, but instead the Dungeon Mag Standards Committee said “Nope, she has to turn into a Hag right away, and attack the party, because she’s the bad guy, no banging allowed”. Turning a potentially interesting adventure into another boring bad guy slug fest. So if you read an adventure that just needed a few little pieces of interesting to make it good, these bits of interesting might have been laying on the cutting-room floor.

    And the Walsh adventure here is pretty fun…Walsh absolutely hits it out of the park every third adventure or so, and even his “Meh” stuff is decent.

  2. Anonymous says:

    Bryce likes a dungeon adventure! Hooray! Mightier than the Sword is certainly a decent investigative adventure, and it is a refreshing change to have a mundane solution rather than the usual murdering shapechanger (see Night of Fear in 28, although that was well done given the somewhat cliched plot). The factions could make this come alive; I think I would have one or
    two people approaching the PCs, offering bribes to frame some disliked rival. The set up reminds
    me of WFRP.

  3. mike says:

    I have wanted to work the quill adventure into my game for years now. And I really like Ex Libris. It is placed in my world and misnamed as an “oracle” as the years have passed. I could imagine folks getting the “place where answers are found” confused along the way.
    Love the Dungeon Magazine reviews. Keep em coming.

  4. Having read your comments on Ex Libris, they made me review the time when I ran the module. I was younger and not as wise. I like wizards and books, and I so I thought it was really cool…looking back it appealed to *me*, but maybe not to the *players*. If/when I run it again, I’d add a lot more activity, make the summoned creatures a lot more varied, and have them summoned several at a time, in stages, and set up a random encounter table…maybe even add another party of monsters/adventurers, maybe something from the ethereal plane or the astral plane, come through a rift or something. The beginning set up I see now is…SO WORDY. So much time spent on the mostly empty, boring temple. The interactions in town. SO WORDY. Brevity is the soul of wit. I understand your point about the ENDLESS TEXT.

  5. I ran Ex Libris a few years ago for the second time (first time was 30+ years ago) and was a bit worried after reading your review, but the players really got into the puzzle aspect of the dungeon. Finding the books is trivialized by Detect Magic being a ritual, and the trap monsters are a bit easy given 5e action economy of 1 vs many. And the plant room is super deadly – enough so that my players knew not to go in.

    But they really enjoyed the props and puzzle.

  6. I’ve run “Mightier Than The Sword” four times over the past few months. I expanded it significantly, adding multiple side plots (a turkey farmer trying to break the goose feather monopoly, a murdered pegasus that has the druids in arms, confident that it’s the loggers) and additional NPCs. Everyone loved it.

    The thing is, it’s the setting that’s amazing. The actual murder plot is a railroad that doesn’t really take advantage of the setting at all. My players end up disappointed that all these interesting side plots and NPCs who are at odds with one another have nothing to do with the actual killing, and they found the “yellow lines on the floor” at the house to be weak.

    I had a great time running it. Thinking of overhauling it a bit more and running it a few more times. Your recommendation on this one is spot on, and I’m glad I was finally able to run it three decades after reading it.

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