{"id":5690,"date":"2019-02-25T07:11:23","date_gmt":"2019-02-25T12:11:23","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/tenfootpole.org\/ironspike\/?p=5690"},"modified":"2019-02-23T07:41:35","modified_gmt":"2019-02-23T12:41:35","slug":"fight-on-14-citadel-of-the-dark-trolls","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/tenfootpole.org\/ironspike\/?p=5690","title":{"rendered":"Fight On! #14 – Citadel of the Dark Trolls"},"content":{"rendered":"\n
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Citadel of the Dark Trolls
Lee Barber

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This is level 9 of the community Fight On Megadungeon The Darkness Beneath. It has nine locales in a large cavern system, with each of them expanded upon in to a number of keyed entries. Deep in its own mythology, it rivals the Ghoul Kingdom. And has no idea how to organize itself for play at the table. Ultimately, a disappointment.
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 Some of the upper levels of Darkness Beneath rank among my best of all time, including what I think of as THE best of all time, Level one. It\u2019s simple, terse, non-standard and creates child-like wonder. I would argue that the Citadel of the Dark Trolls is has the most expectations of all the levels presented. That \u201cdungeon map\u201d that rides along with every Darkness Beneath level has had it staring us in the face for many years. Yeah, it\u2019s not the LAST level, the Tomb of the Dark Lord remains there as desert, but Citadel has the kick ass name and the teaser right from level one, with the great doors on the underground highway. Lee has written something that lives up to the expectations set. It\u2019s deep and rich and full of that hinted at mystery and mythology that Kingdom of the Ghouls (Baur) also did so well. You get a real sense for the place, and it\u2019s not generic AT ALL. I have an issue with expectations and you can see that in many of my reviews. It\u2019s not my most charming quality. But this dungeon met my expectations. It FEELS like the Citadel of the Dark Trolls.
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The caverns have about nine major locales. These are large open areas and  the like, on a grand scale ala Descent in to the Depths of the Earth. Not really a hex crawl, but there\u2019s a sense of large space\/distance here. It\u2019s a nod to the ecology and the \u201ckingdom\u201d of the dark trolls. Each locale is expanded upon, some more than others. There are fully keyed out locations, like the citadel proper, and then other locations that get more than a nod, like the troll \u201cfarmlands.\u201d The hand-waving gets a little deep at the some places, like the farmlands\/supporting \u201ccountryside\u201d but it\u2019s at a level that is about appropriate for something like this. It\u2019s enough to give the DM something to work with, as a sideline if the party should flee there, for example, but I think also recognizes that this is not a 90 page supplement but rather one article\/dungeon in a magazine with about 20 other articles in it also. 
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I\u2019m going to concentrate on three points to the review, two minor and one major. First, I quibble with the overview map & key. Oh, did I say key? I mean, it doesn\u2019t actually have a key. The \u201cbig map\u201d has a hex-like map of nine locations, each with a number and a little embedded \u201c#1 is the gatehouse\u201d chart on the map. And then the main text has GATEHOUSE instead of \u201c#1- Gatehouse.\u201dI\u2019ve seen a couple of adventures do this lately and I\u2019m not sure where it\u2019s coming from. (Since this was written a few years, I guess from this?) There\u2019s this reliance on textual headers to convey location information. I don\u2019t get it. How does that make it clearer? Maybe if magazine page numbers were on the chart also or something. But forcing me to fig through the text to find a one line offset entry for \u201cGATEHOUSE\u201d is not the way to earn \u201cI am the friend to the DM\u201d points. 
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Secondly, the linkages to the other levels seems a bit light. As an example, the gatehouse notes that the guards will let you through with a legitimate reason. Three are listed: legitimate bounty, an identifying item\/pass, or you want to fight in the pit games. I know, all too well, how hard it is to link up a deeper level to an earlier one when you\u2019re writing it at different times, and yet that\u2019s the challenge to overcome. 
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Both of those are symptoms of a larger problem, the need to think about how the adventure will be run and orienting the writing and layout towards that. For example, on of the rooms at the gatehouse tells us what happens if people fly over the gatehouse. It\u2019s the room with the giant ballista in it. Ok, that makes sense, in a way. But \u2026 isn\u2019t it more likely that the party will just fly over the gatehouse and the DM will be left digging through the adventure looking at keys, ALL of the keys, to see what happens then? Why would you not put this information \u201cup front\u201d outside of the keys? That\u2019s where the information is likely to be needed. Buried in room 23 of 76 would wouldn\u2019t have a note about what happens if the party doesn\u2019t visit the dungeon, would you? 
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But, the major issue is that I like to think this level is incomprehensible. Each and every room is so THICK and DENSE that you can\u2019t make out what is going on and how it relates to the issue\/room at hand. Rooms are a third of a column, or a column. Paragraph breaks are few and far between. I\u2019m looking at room 2 of the gatehouse right now. It\u2019s about half a column of text without bolding or paragraph breaks. There are long digressions in the rooms of things like: 
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\u201cSkaemir was returned to the Citadel by posturing goblins, his lacerated flesh sliding from exposed bone. To chastise the troll nobles, Gorangol kept the Prince\u2019s equipment, ate his Blood Thump, and demanded that a week-long party for her wild goblins be held at Dagendreng Hold, free of charge. While recovering, the angry Prince learned that the Shamans blamed an outbreak of disease on his combined failures to uphold prophecy.\u201d
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Uh, ok. I guess so. Is the middle of a room description the best place to put that fluff?
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And fluff it is. Fluff after fluff after fluff. That section comes from a column and a half that describes fighting styles and other information. WITH ONE PARAGRAPH BREAK.That\u2019s what this level is. It\u2019s a fluff regional setting book. I don\u2019t review those. Since fluff is solely inspiration, and I think that\u2019s totally subjective (or, maybe, I don\u2019t know how to review subjective shit) I don\u2019t review fluff. I like it, and don\u2019t mean fluff in a derogatory term, but it\u2019s not an adventure.
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This is 27 pages of fluff masquerading as an adventure. Ye Olde Pushbacke &| guidance seems to have been missing.
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It\u2019s fucking cool, but I\u2019m currently running a game, not reading the background guide for a Tv series writer.
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This is $8 on Lulu.
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