{"id":5608,"date":"2019-02-18T07:12:01","date_gmt":"2019-02-18T12:12:01","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/tenfootpole.org\/ironspike\/?p=5608"},"modified":"2019-02-18T07:49:55","modified_gmt":"2019-02-18T12:49:55","slug":"the-beast-of-briar-creek","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/tenfootpole.org\/ironspike\/?p=5608","title":{"rendered":"The Beast of Briar Creek"},"content":{"rendered":"\n
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By J
New Realms Publishing
Labyrinth Lord
Level 1<\/pre>\n\n\n\n
On a mission to request aid from the Enchanter Tyrion, your band of volunteers will be traveling along the Weatherstone Road. A well traveled route, there are few travelers on the road now and what you do find isn\u2019t friendly. And then there is the lurking menace, the monster that has come to dominate the fears of travelers and locals alike, the Beast of Briar Creek.
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This seven page adventure has two encounters in it, in a linear format. You walk up a road rom your village to a wizards tower. Get attacked on the road. Visit an inn, maybe. Maybe get attacked. By kobolds. Cross a bridge with a monster under it. End.
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So, it has read-aloud and the read-aloud is short. It\u2019s not the best read-aloud, but it doesn\u2019t suffer from things like describing room dimensions or other problems. And it is clearly making an effort to paint a decent picture. 
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The DM text after the read-aloud tries to describe a situation for the DM. It has a paragraph or so of things like a mud-bogged road, and so on, and then says something like brown blobs attack from the trees. If I squint hard I can maybe see what the designer was going for. What is comes across as is \u201cyou\u2019re on a muddy road and some blob monsters come out of the woods and attack.\u201d I think though the designer may have been trying for something else. Let\u2019s say that instead of free-form text the DM text was a list of bullets. The first one said. Something like \u201cthe road bogs down in mug, travel is quartered. Shoes get stuck in it and come off feet. People slip.\u201d and then another one that said something like \u201c2\/3d across the valley blob monsters come out.\u201d or something like that, or more. Then you\u2019ve got a little scene. The DM is going back and forth with the players. The mud is reinforced. They are trying to avoid it, or keep their shoes on, or wipe the mud off when slipped. Maybe even some muddy puddles that LOOK like the blob monsters. Now you\u2019ve got a little more than \u201cyou are walking down the muddy road and get attacked.\u201d Certainly the text doesn\u2019t preclude the little extras I mentioned, but it relies on the DM to add it. The bullets, extra detail, etc instead give a clearer picture to the DM of the environment and encourage further play without necessarily being prescriptive. Which is assisting the DM in running it at the table.
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A lot of the intro text is abstracted. The weather is foul. The crops are rotting. The water has gone bad in places. Rumors of monsters in the night. Village elders held a meeting. This is all abstracted. Old man Crawford\u2019s well went bad his plow ox died after drinking it. 3 weeks of rain and the fields are waterlogged. Old Man Martin is again going to the wizard for help but Crawford is distraught and wants his help, gummit! This cements things in a way that abstracted text can never. There\u2019s buy in.
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Finally, lets talk price. I\u2019ve been thinking about this lately, and I think I\u2019ve mentioned it before. This is $2 for seven pages (which includes the cover and legal statement.) There are five encounters, one of which is just a \u201cleaving the village\u201d read aloud and one of which is just \u201cvisit an inn.\u201d Further, a third one might not happen if you skip the inn, do it right. Is it worth $2? G1 is a good adventure, is 8 pages, and was $17.50 in 2019 dollars. And yet I see people bitch about $2 adventures that have 50 rooms in them in a good dungeon level format in 6 pages. There is a bias, I think, against short page counts. We expect shit to be padded to hell so we don\u2019t accept a short $2 adventure. Which means it has to be padded to hell to justify a page count to justify the $2. That\u2019s not cool. Cool things can be short. I will say again, I wish DriveThru had a no questions asked return policy. \u00a0<\/p>\n\n\n\n
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This is available on DriveThru for $2. There\u2019s no preview. Otherwise you wouldn\u2019t buy it?<\/p>\n\n\n\n
https:\/\/www.drivethrurpg.com\/product\/266680\/An-Evenings-Adventure-1-The-Beast-of-Briar-Creek?affiliate_id=1892600<\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"
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