squeen
8, 8, I forget what is for
@Malrex : You are still The Man --- even trashed. (Don't blow all your Kickstarter funds on booze and wild women!)The last sentence could use a little work though..focus on the breaking of the silence...I feel like something is missing to change it from 'trying to hard' to 'nailing it'.
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And I LOVE the fact that there isnt a dangerous mold or slime....keep people on their toes. Are the mushrooms edible or dangerous?
You are correct as usual, it DOES need something --- the rest of the adventure re-written! I think you are anticipating/sensing the action that waits.
But not yet, my friend. Not yet. The empty/silent spaces make the crescendo that much louder. The players know they in the Eye of the Storm. All is calm for the moment. Let the tension build.
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With regards to the mushrooms...it's what I posted to EOTB about (many moons ago) over in the Illusions thread. There is "the spiel" (as my players now call it) that sets the table. They are so used to me doing it, they walk right past the "skeletons hanging from the walls"...until it's too late (and they start hacking them to bits). These are just normal forest mushrooms. They are not there because they are "important for the players", they are there because when I visualize the space, that's what's I see.
But something is watching.
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